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Monoku - Pelican Wings

pelican wings wide beautiful his face and pride drops down to visit . . . ___________________ April 2, 2016 Poetry/Monoku/The Not So Original Copyright Protected, ID 16-774-112-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, The Not So Original Monoku Challenge, sponsor, Timothy Hicks, Theme - what I see image of pelican Thirteen Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 10:54:00 PM

Broken, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA

Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2016 2:56:00 PM

Linda, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2016 8:18:00 PM

I agree with Laura. For me, it was one of the more creative ones and with that internal rhyme I really liked it! Congrats in the contest, my friend.

Constance La France
Date: 4/8/2016 9:20:00 AM

Andrea, thank you for that, no more needs to be said, I think you know how I feel about this ~

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/7/2016 4:11:00 PM

I liked this one, and thought it should have placed higher, Connie. Congrats on your win :)

Constance La France
Date: 4/7/2016 4:34:00 PM

Laura, thanks for that, I sort of thought that also, I guess seeing the beauty of the bird was not original enough ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2016 3:34:00 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara.. Thanks for all the visits to my page..

Constance La France
Date: 4/7/2016 4:35:00 PM

Sara, thanks for the awesome, and the compliment, I was disappointed with the placement but I guess it does not matter when ones wings are broken already ~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/7/2016 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 4/7/2016 4:36:00 PM

Nayda, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2016 1:44:00 PM

This was a welcoming sight and visit, Constance! Always welcome to drop in:) Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 4/7/2016 4:37:00 PM

Paul, thanks for visiting, well 13th place is not really a win, obviously not original enough, I saw beauty where others saw a clumsy bird ~

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/7/2016 12:04:00 PM

Congrats BO for wonderful line to win. Anisha D

Constance La France
Date: 4/7/2016 4:38:00 PM

Anisha, I am assuming you mean BW, not sure who BO is, but if me thanks for the wonderful ~

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/7/2016 9:29:00 AM

That's what I like about you Broken! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Constance La France
Date: 4/7/2016 4:39:00 PM

Hans, thanks for the compliment and visit, it was much of a win but I am still proud of my poem ~