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The Nights Shadow

For Aslong as my mind does remember, The dark of the Night fills me up with Terror. A memorable night at the bottom of the bed I Lay, A ghostly figure, A haunting Wave. Out from the cupboard a hand like figure appeared, Bringing upon me an unwanted Fear. A moment of Panic as I shouted and screamed, waking my Parents from the pleasant dreams. Awakened they were as they adjusted their eyes, looking upon me as I cowered and Cried. Softly they whispered " Steven are you Ok " As they gazed towards my Snow White face. Frightened and shaken I started to Speak, The tears still drilling onto my Cheek. Over there towards the ghost in the Cupboard, I slowly disappeared under the Covers. Mum and Dad looked over replying that they both couldn't see and that darkness of Night was playing tricks on me. To this day I believe what I'd seen, it wasn't a trick, or part of Dream. Afraid of the Dark my phobia remains, as I continue to play these Ghost hide and seek games.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/14/2015 3:24:00 PM
Blimey, many a night I awoke to your screams, wow. You went back to sleep as if nothing had happened once appeased. Me, my heart was beating fast so long afterwards. Hopefully no more :) :)
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Date: 3/14/2015 8:42:00 AM
weeeeee.. sometimes such nightmares really happen but then I found out one to counteract it, -praying.. with regards to the form, I think it may fall to narrative or prose.. :)!..//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/6/2015 10:27:00 PM
You have portrayed the theme, phobia nicely with right amount of emotions. But the line breaks I think you have to give a little more attention, else it looks as a prose piece rather a poetry..Best of luck..Steven :-) Give a 5 rate
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Steven Fraser
Date: 3/20/2015 3:58:00 PM
Thank you for your input, I'll take this on board and hope to improve with future pieces :)

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