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The Naked Truth

Truth stands naked, a tarnished treasure It is not a thing you can measure Built with illusions, taught since birth Because of this we've devalued its worth The world we believe, our mind's conception More often than not with our own perception Truth is, it's neither imagined or created It is simplicity and not complicated To fear naked truth is to conspire And flee from what is, not your desire To be blind to the truth is to infer and leave a shadow of your character contest Naked 11/11/16

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Date: 11/17/2016 10:16:00 AM
eloquent artwords that's the truth, frederick... sweet congrats and huggs!
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Date: 11/17/2016 10:06:00 AM
I love the write, Frederic, Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/16/2016 9:28:00 PM
A good write. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/16/2016 2:51:00 PM
Frederic congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write ~
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Date: 11/16/2016 2:08:00 PM
Frederic your sis among one of many that shines! This topic was terrific! The truth is open...case closed!! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/16/2016 10:16:00 AM
I like your approach. Congrats
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Date: 11/13/2016 9:46:00 AM
wow, you took the contest to a new level writing of the naked truth. Very nicely done, Frederic.
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Date: 11/13/2016 7:07:00 AM
Excellent. Your statement was so profound. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/11/2016 8:29:00 PM
A very impressive poem with strong message ... enjoyed and lerant too ...
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Date: 11/11/2016 6:27:00 PM
Excellent poem, Frederic. great message. That last stanza is the naked truth!
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Date: 11/11/2016 5:47:00 PM
Hi Frederic I agree with Christy. Your statement was so profound and well said. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)
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Date: 11/11/2016 4:46:00 PM
This is an excellent poem making a profound statement.
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