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The Movie

Run ! Thuds! Thuds! THUDS! Bellowing thunder at the carpet display of lightening There, are wars and guns… Wails and the terrors of an enraged whales BLOOD SHEDS… THE COLOUR IS RED… THIS IS BLOOD Run! Help me , Help my mother, my sister, OH! my Child Flakes of fire… Clots spreads .. A SHOCKING SPLASH AND BOOM! WAILS… DEBRIS… DREAMS BURIED IN BLOODS I have seen the MOVIE.

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Date: 3/29/2014 4:42:00 PM
Goodness, , CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/26/2014 10:52:00 AM
Goodness, wonderful sound effects and great layout, very creative poem. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest. Sorry to be so late saying so.
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Date: 3/22/2014 10:11:00 PM
Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, goodness
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