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The Most Beautiful Bard of All ~

As I myself considered this visions given truth ~ My spirit reserved unto its magnificent path.... Recognition, deep down inside that it is not I, who are a poet at all Not as one whom would be thought although, I do sometimes write? A verse extracted from these tempered veins; such caverns of gold ~ The greatest story ever told; time and time again.... Paintings, brushed throughout the centuries; days of old Loving hands; so very softly do they hold, this majestic quill, before These brightened eyes of mine; tender etchings upon the parchments Precious blood dipped ink; the Lamb of life thus spoken Speaking, from within this humbled heart and soul; rejoicing Rippling waters a voice from Heaven; resounding these words; so lovely.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "He," the most beautiful bard, of them all ~ Note: Smile ~ I Know, Just Call Me A Dreamer; "'Love,' Always," John!:) ~

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Date: 12/4/2010 11:06:00 AM
I love this. beautifully written!
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Date: 11/25/2010 10:26:00 PM
A very beautiful message beautifully portrayed. Hope your Thanksgiving was pure delight. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/25/2010 11:21:00 AM
This is beautiful, John! "He" would be thankful for your open minded spirit, and the preciousness of your soul. I remember reading something from a great poet here, to the effect that hope nourishes dreams. To be a dreamer is to nourish hope...I think this is something to always cherish. Wishing you the best!! Love to you, Mikki :)
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Date: 11/17/2010 2:48:00 PM
Dreamer or not, you rock, still, John Rhinem. He is the Most Beautiful Bard, The Word himself who passed it on to David, The psalmist, long before he, David, was born, then came out of the same house, to bring "tidings" of untold joy to we who were lost and those lost who we pray will all be found!!!! Amazing, my forever friend!
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Date: 11/14/2010 5:10:00 PM
Enjoyed your work this eve..I am glad that I stopped by....Someday that voice will call..Sara
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Date: 11/14/2010 5:16:00 AM
doris needs to look up the word Bard.
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Date: 11/14/2010 5:13:00 AM
you encouraged me to do one thing that all these years i have never done. taking it for advantave the unimportantness of the word. you made me look up "bard". it had one word for it's definition "poet". and looking at celene's comment i see she looked it up too. John H Loving III
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Date: 11/14/2010 3:07:00 AM
He is the greatest artist and poet of all times,isn't he John?beautiful words flowing from your heart. .beautiful!tmfvs
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Date: 11/13/2010 7:12:00 PM
great!
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Date: 11/13/2010 4:56:00 PM
Yes, HE is the greatest poet, John
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Date: 11/13/2010 3:38:00 PM
Hey John...Is this a christmas poem?? that is what it seems like to me.
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