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The Mortal Potter

All will pass away Test of time lay unendured Potter too is clay 12/19/2014 Contest: East Jesus Sponsor: Roy Jerden

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 5:00:00 PM

interesting haiku

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/3/2015 8:54:00 PM

Brilliant write Arlene! Congrats on huge win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/3/2015 5:55:00 AM

Congrats on the the win with this fine take on the theme, Arlene

Paul Callus

Date: 1/2/2015 10:57:00 AM

Lovely haiku with a strong ending and worthy message. Congrats on your fine win, Arlene! // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/2/2015 10:53:00 AM

You are simply superb,congrats on the win...huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 10:24:00 AM

a beautiful haiku many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/29/2014 1:46:00 PM

A magnificent little gem. Powerful last line.

Robert Johnson

Date: 12/21/2014 6:57:00 PM

Time is all that will ever last. No matter how many pots are cast. God above with all his love. Is what mankind must hold steadfast. Peace. :)

Arlene Smith
Date: 12/21/2014 8:55:00 PM

Peace to you, dear friend...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2014 2:30:00 PM

very interesting last line. Potter too is clay!! Enjoyed this one, arlene.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/20/2014 7:40:00 AM

Great images to draw a pen picture, Arlene

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/20/2014 6:58:00 AM

- Hey ...a great haiku !.... a Christmas smile to you - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas, Arlene :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/20/2014 3:49:00 AM

Very beautiful haiku Arlene! Truly enjoyed it dear friend. I wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Have a very nice weekend. :) Love and hugs! xxx D.