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The Moon Vision

I am the moon I am here I do not swoon I am at peace Gravity embraces me, surrounds me I am full but not always seen My corridors of truth are hidden The sun shines on me, but most do not see I have my own arcane depths A side of mystery, a side of secret Not of darkness but a side of rebellious fire The earth cannot see my desire They won’t understand, my other half My face of sonorous wrath. I am flashed with light and create a dazzling glow So celestial, so pure But still a face of murmurous shadow Every moon has a division One side in the light, one in the dark In darkness she will defend herself and prove her faith Until the light enhances her beauty and sparks her glow. No doubt she is of good Something unknown is not to be feared A sacred heart is not to be judged She has her own surreal path, a way of devotion Nothing to prove She has herself Still turning to the gorgeous sun to accept its never-ending grace. But they must know She isn’t always for show.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/20/2016 8:00:00 AM
Fabulous poem, Amber, Congratulations for topping the chart with this gem of a poem.
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Date: 10/20/2016 7:53:00 AM
so beautiful Amber...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 4/23/2016 9:59:00 AM
Amber, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/23/2016 2:18:00 AM
I like the way your moon beams Amber! Peace and many blessings to you.
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Date: 4/23/2016 1:31:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Amber. :)
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Date: 4/22/2016 1:41:00 PM
Amber,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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