The Moon - the Pantoum Style

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~THE MOON ~ (Pantoum) THE MOON IS NOT BRIGHT TONIGHT WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE MOON I WISH IT WAS REALLY BRIGHT I JUST LOVE WATCHING THE MOON WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE MOON I MISS WATCHING IT SHINE HIGH I JUST LOVE WATCHING THE MOON PEEPING HER YELLOW FACE THROUGH I MISS WATCHING IT SHINE HIGH WITH ALL THE CLOUDS PLAYING HIDE 'N SEEK PEEPING HER YELLOW FACE THRUOUGH SHE CAN PLAY WITH US ALL KIND OF TRICKS WITH THE CLOUDS PLAYING HIDE 'N SEEK I WISH IT WAS REALLY BRIGHT SHE CAN PLAY WITH US ALL KIND OF TRICKS THE MOON IS NOT BRIGHT TONIGHT. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 November.30.2015

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