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The Moon

One spring night, Just for fun, I rode the crescent moon. Then left her below to gaze on me, As I soared miles high In the still starlit laughing Spring air! 4/2013

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Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/24/2013 8:18:00 AM

Lovely imagery here!! enjoyed reading..regards INK-U-SCRIPT

Skat A

Date: 4/23/2013 10:42:00 PM

Sharon, Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2013 3:29:00 PM

wow, is this you leaving your body behind, in order to soar through the wonderful spring air. Sharon, I enjoyed this moon poem very much~ , "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"