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The Misunderstood

Amid a life of imperative breathing There lived a girl, her heart was bleeding. She cared not much for earthly things Though she yearned relief, from which fulfillment brings. Such loneliness her soul does feel, Her heart was crying, no comfort could heal. She's losing faith at a rapid rate, For too long she's searched and now she waits. "If you are out there, hear my cry, Feel my spirit calling, before I lay down to die."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/21/2016 1:19:00 PM
Greetings fellow poets. Just a word of thanks for the kind words. Its much appreciated! xxx
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Date: 4/18/2016 7:18:00 AM
Hey Welcome to Poetrysoup. Nicely written
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Date: 4/18/2016 7:17:00 AM
Hey Welcome to Poetrysoup. Nicely written
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Date: 3/29/2016 7:59:00 AM
Hey Natasha :) - I welcome you to Poetry - Soup :) - Thank you for your first poem, I look forward to many, many more in the future :) - Have fun, meet many "poet" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/27/2016 11:31:00 PM
Natasha Prins, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/27/2016 8:17:00 PM
Natasha, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/27/2016 1:30:00 PM
Beautiful write , Natasha. I just joined very recently and received a warm welcome. Wanted to extend it to new members too. Looking forward to reading more of your poems:) Ren
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