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The Missing Star

An empty destination knowing not where paths may lead. Un forsaken is the day when the bloom turned into seed. Relentless is the nagging of what could have taken place. In hind site takes its toll, removes the smile from my face. Like a butterfly back to the form of its beginning state. Its beauty wiped from existence a tattered heart as it deflates. The wholeness of the picture as I'm watching from afar. An uneasy thought emerges, for my skies's missing a star.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2015 12:28:00 PM
Nice work
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Date: 3/16/2015 12:17:00 AM
KIMBERLY, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2015 4:17:00 PM
Kimberly:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/28/2015 9:23:00 PM
Kimberly, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/28/2015 9:18:00 PM
Kimberly, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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