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The Miser

The miser pinched his pennies A mime who danced for dimes Reserved in days of plenty For days of rose and wine Planted seeds of kindness Did tend his garden well Toiled forever mindless Awaiting the steeple knell But came a spring of drought Bright green did turn to brown Old miser chanced on doubt As blood dripped off his brow The summer hinted rain In fall the winds did blow Winter froze the panes Next spring it rained and flowed His nest was all but barren The garden wild with weed And days of his preparin' Had all but gone to seed His roses did not bloom His wine did sour and smell No dancing did resume Alas the tolling bell an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/2/2016 5:57:00 PM
He who does not tend to his affairs is likely to suffer distress as you so rightly point out. Full of brilliant imagery and superb phrasing. Well done! Best wishes, Keith
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/2/2016 6:20:00 PM
Much obliged, my friend. Words to live by. Thank you for your support and kindness.
Date: 2/2/2016 8:11:00 AM
This poem tugged at my heartstrings! Beautiful write!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/2/2016 8:17:00 AM
Thank you, Sarita. It happens all to often, a catastrophic illness or event and no matter how much we plan and prepare, it just doesn't seem to be enough. I appreciate your support.
Date: 2/1/2016 1:08:00 PM
- Great written, well done Daniel ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/1/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, for the beautiful flowers.
Date: 2/1/2016 11:06:00 AM
accolades for you, daniel... a serious, meaningful artword!... huggs!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/1/2016 1:34:00 PM
Thank you, nette, I'm always glad to have you stop by to read and comment.
Date: 2/1/2016 3:34:00 AM
creatively written and flows so well.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/1/2016 6:32:00 AM
Thank you, Ms. Olive, You're so kind. I am so glad you stopped by to read and comment.
Date: 2/1/2016 12:09:00 AM
Great n sublime in metaphor and the phrasing very poetic. The rhyming is superb too but the meter n f low is what is even more wonderful. A mod ballad on the plight of the miser woah. Kudos. Pls do review my latest poem too.
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Date: 1/31/2016 8:31:00 PM
hey I really like this, poemdog! and it flows really well too.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/31/2016 8:48:00 PM
Many thanks, Andrea. A metaphoric tragedy. It happens to almost everyone who suffers a catastrophic illness or event, No matter how much you plan and save, you're never quite prepared.
Date: 1/31/2016 2:31:00 PM
A beautiful and great poem. I enjoy the read........A.M.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/31/2016 2:50:00 PM
Thank you, Afolabi for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 1/31/2016 2:15:00 PM
captivating poem relating a story so beautifully written, dear Daniel!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/31/2016 2:49:00 PM
Many thanks dear friend. Sadly, it is the story of many lives that suffer in catastrophic illnesses or events. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 1/31/2016 9:20:00 AM
Nicely done!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/31/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Jeannie. Your continuous support is overwhelming.

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