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The Memories of War

I knew that the war had come to an end at last Cheers rise from the army Oceans of tears come from the past. It was time to go home To families and friends And back to Rome We celebrated the feast Until we heard a “PAROSA!” From underwater came a giant beast We knew we were in danger At the mercy of the monster But suddenly there appeared a mysterious stranger He was glowing with light Shinier than silver And far too bright We tried to hide Any place we could But the light was by our side A voice said “God will help us win” You have nothing to fear Help will come to you from within The words came true We were set free We won and triumphed in the war, you see . (Benedict 8 years)

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Date: 2/24/2016 10:00:00 AM
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Date: 2/21/2016 11:11:00 AM
Benedict, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Benedict John
Date: 2/24/2016 9:40:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment
Date: 12/24/2015 12:24:00 PM
BENEDICT, a pleasure to read :) have yourself A wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year....... SKAT LOVE
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Benedict John
Date: 2/24/2016 9:39:00 AM
Thanks for the wishes for my son. I hope he will write more poems in the new year.
Date: 12/24/2012 10:43:00 PM
Hey Ben Nice work Here. I am Tahera. I am your father's friend. Nice to have you here on soup.
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Date: 1/16/2013 2:16:00 AM
hi Tahera, nice to hear from you. anil here btw. ben is off poems for some time now. too much school work. he might write during summer vacations. I see you are a star at poetrysoup. keep going. - anil

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