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The Medusa Touch

What have I done? She wonders… Brittle blue gaze riveted on her lover’s chiseled features His is a face set in stone Eyes, mouth, jaw; all fixed, grim – a granite façade Where has the softness gone? That tender dawning of affection… The loving gleam in dark chocolate eyes… What have I done to erase it? She wonders - Because she knows it was her doing Knows it instinctively; The knowledge is engrained in every fiber of her being It was she, who else, who turned that face into rock, It was she who wiped away the smile, the glow Her cursed ire, her impatience, her irascible self-destructive streak – With these tools she chipped away at him until he splintered Yes she has broken him; Broken the one thing she loved in all the world Medusa-like, her willful cerulean glare turned him to stone Now his eyes are twin pebbles Cool, hard, unforgiving; A grating stare is all he has to offer her His heart sits motionless, a hunk of marble in the cage of his ribs Beating for her no longer His love for her has died a frigid death; drowned in a sea of ice No more the fluid caresses, the warm grins, the ruffling of her hair No more, no more, his love for her… It is an unfeeling and frigid monument now A tombstone, a dusty memory, the rattling chill of the Reaper’s breath She has turned him into stone Her lover - and her love - is no more Oh Medusa, Medusa my girl, what have you done?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/15/2009 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations! I really liked this poem when I first read it....being featured is well deserved! I hope it motivates you to keep writing and share your beautiful talent! love, Steve
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:56:00 PM
Amy - Sometimes hon life just turns us that way - Very well written piece that expressed your emotions well, Congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/10/2009 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2009 6:00:00 AM
Congrats Amy, on "The Medusa Touch" being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:34:00 AM
This was excellent, and a wonderful moral for anyone who is in a relationship. You expressed it very well and I love how you gave the example of Medusa, perfect. Congrats on being featured this week, it was well deserved! I am faving this. :) Love, another Amy LOL
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Date: 2/10/2009 3:56:00 AM
thank you so much guys for your wonderful compliments, i am profoundly grateful to you all, and very honoured that my poem was featured :D
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Date: 2/9/2009 1:50:00 PM
Powerful, interesting and original write here, Amy and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/9/2009 9:31:00 AM
OOoh - Great analogy of having the Medusa touch and turning him to stone. Congrats on this poem being featured
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Date: 2/8/2009 6:07:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on being featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/21/2009 3:10:00 PM
I welcome you to POETRYSOUP where you are amongst great company. I invite you to read some of my work...Raul
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