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The Meadows

THE MEADOWS A soft gentle breeze flows through the quite meadows as the birds and butterflies joyfully sing and dance, The perfect scene for you and I The perfect scene for romance. With all of our troubles set aside with no worries on our minds, The meadows seem to have adopted us we have become as one of their kind. So much peace, so much freedom so much joy We both entered these meadows as adults But have now become a little girl and a boy. "Sing" she says to me, "for the birds shall sing with you" "dance" I say to her, "and the butterflies will too."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/5/2010 9:07:00 PM
ah, the flower inspired a sweet romantic romp in this poem from you. IT kind of reminds me of my recent post, "in clover we lay!" I don't think i"ve seen you in a while! So nice to read this one tonight and congrats for making it in the winner circle. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/4/2010 6:28:00 PM
Thank yo for all your positve comments.
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Date: 6/4/2010 6:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM in my contest. YOur poetry is top knotch and a real pleasure to read.
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:55:00 PM
Congrats Edward on your HM in Mac's contest depicting the rose photo.. enjoy a wonderful honor tonight .. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:51:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Edward. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2010 6:14:00 PM
I enjoyed the poem.
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Date: 5/2/2010 4:52:00 PM
Oh I love this. It's so simple and sweet. Beautifully written. :)
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