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The Man Who Loved Rain Woman

She loved him when she was a young girl, stepping softly on the rocks, Holding her basket close, as rain fell on her dampened hair; Seeing him across the river, she raised her eyes to his, and smiled; Looking upon The Man Who Loved Gimiwanookwe. Her love grew stronger when they first knew each other, Silently, among the towering pines, hidden from their families, She reached her hand to his, loving him as rain and thunder raged; Giving herself to The Man Who Loved Gimiwanookwe. Her love grew stronger when they defied their fathers and rode away, Running the white horse full out against the wind, as rain pounded the world; Laughing as she laid her face against his back, seeking shelter, Resting upon The Man Who Loved Gimiwanookwe. Her love grew stronger when she felt the consequences, Of losing all she knew, all she was born to be, A woman who chose to live hard and uncertain; Keeping with The Man Who Loved Gimiwanookwe. Her love grew stronger when they birthed their child, He easing the child from her heaving body, She looking silently to the heavens as rain melted her tears; Trusting in The Man Who Loved Gimiwanookwe. Her love grew stronger when their children grew away, And he became restless, longing for his lands, his heritage; Leaving her on a day of bitter darkness, rain fell on his bowed head; Looking away from him, pulling inward, her sorrow met the rain; Grieving for The Man Who Loved Gimiwanookwe. On a day when rain softly touched the world, He returned to her, with fear in his eyes -- She had never seen him afraid; He told her he had dreamed of the white horse, Running full out against the wind, Ridden by The Man Who Loved Gimiwanookwe. Her tears fell upon his face And became the rain, As she held him close, And the day faded from his eyes. The white horse thundered towards the heavens, Running full out against the wind as she leaned against his neck. Her tears pounded the world as she rode against the wind, Urging her spirit horse to mount faster towards the sky. She is Rain Woman, daughter of the spirit god, Riding upon the white horse, thundering across the skies, Her tears of pain and sorrow fall upon the earth; Mourning The Man Who Loved Gimiwanookwe. [Written by Deb Radke for the contest 'Rain, The Story', sponsored by Constance La France.] [‘Gimiwanookwe’ from the Ojibwe language meaning ‘Rain Woman’. This poem is based on nothing other than my imagination, and I mean no disrespect to the Ojibwe peoples.]

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Date: 1/16/2011 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Constance's contest, Deb! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:16:00 PM
gosh, Deb, you sure fooled me. I would never have thought this was anything other than a real Indian legend. Marvelou writing. So glad it is in the winner circle. congratulations! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:52:00 AM
Such a creative story, Deb. All of the entries I have read have taken a different spin on the theme and you did a great job. Congratulatiions on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:22:00 AM
And very imaginative it is. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Constance, deb
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:19:00 AM
dazzling legend with beautiful inner phrasings, deb.... BOG CONGRATS to you! : )nette
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:05:00 PM
Many Congrats Deb on big win with this imaginative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:30:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in the Rain Story contest with this elegant entry my friend.. enjoy your success on the top ten list with luv..
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Date: 12/16/2010 2:08:00 PM
Hooray, Michael. I am so glad you like this one better as well. I think this it. Thank you, thank you...
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Date: 12/16/2010 1:53:00 PM
I like this version better also, you made some real good changes... I wish you the best in the contest... your poet friend with love Michael
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Date: 12/16/2010 1:11:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 12/16/2010 11:46:00 AM
This is high praise, and I thank you. Thank you for taking time to read it again. Take care, Deb
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Date: 12/16/2010 11:35:00 AM
Reading from Rain Woman's perspective brings it to life. It's a smashing love story told through your words Deb. I wish it all the very best in the contest, it's sure is a winner in my eyes....James :)
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Date: 12/16/2010 9:49:00 AM
Stunning poetry Deb, and beautifully written >> James :)
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Date: 12/16/2010 4:45:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Deb. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/15/2010 4:05:00 PM
Excellent Poetry and a great entry if this is for a contest... your poetry warms my heart... and I must say this again you are a true Poet my dear friend...luv Michael
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