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The Makeover - On Top of a Mountain

On Top Of A Mountain 2 stroll down the forest trail to the edge and inhale at the sight overlooking perfect nature held together and prevail stand by the site of trees and bushes with lichen hanging over their branches surrounding the ledge with ferns, rhododendrons, and tall grass marvel at a sea of fog covering all the pine trees that spear outward standing tall providing natures home as the mountain walls tower overall sky exhibit splendor clouds of different shapes that stir sun is trying to sneak a peek through nature waiting anxious for it to enter a beautiful site standing viewing off the mountain looking down for the fog to roll back to view the world and embrace the living © By Eve Roper 3/25/2015 Rubaiyat Form On Top Of A Mountain Lichen hanging from dried branches Ferns found everywhere A sea of fog covers all Pine trees spears outward standing tall Mountain walls tower over all Sky of splendor, clouds of different shapes Sun is trying to sneak through A beautiful sight on top of a mountain looking down © By Eve Roper 12/06/2014 Light Poetry Form Contest: Name The Makeover Sponsor :Roy Jerden

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Date: 4/19/2015 2:07:00 PM
Sorry that I am so late on the congrats, just recently found out the contest was finalized.. Big congrats on your win!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/19/2015 2:28:00 PM
Thank you,Robert, Blessings and hugs sir
Date: 4/18/2015 5:35:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your awesome win. Luv LINDA
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/18/2015 6:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda, for the thoughtful comment and congratulations. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 4/15/2015 11:50:00 AM
Hi Eve: Beautiful exotic splendor as seen on the top of the mountain. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/15/2015 1:26:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph, for your visit and compliment. Blessings eve
Date: 3/26/2015 1:42:00 PM
Very descriptive work or works..I enjoyed reading both..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for visitung my page..Sara
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/26/2015 6:15:00 PM
Sara, thank you for your inspiring compliment and encouragement. Blessings dear friend Eve
Date: 3/26/2015 8:23:00 AM
Eve, I think both poems are beautiful but there is something about that second one that really spoke to my soul, best of luck in the contest, a perfect 7 for me, and thanks for visiting my makeover poem, still weeping . . .
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/26/2015 6:16:00 PM
Broken Wing, thank you so very much for your inspiring compliment and the best luck in the contest and seven. Blessings dear friend Eve
Date: 3/26/2015 5:54:00 AM
This won the context? It should have...
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/26/2015 6:19:00 PM
Means a lot to me
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/26/2015 6:18:00 PM
Thank you, Hennington, your compliment means to me. Blessings dear poet Eve
Date: 3/25/2015 8:44:00 PM
A wonderful makeover, Eve, just like the original but with more beautiful imagery to enjoy! Hugs, Rhonda
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/26/2015 6:20:00 PM
Thank you, Rhonda, I enjoyed the make over on this poem. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 3/25/2015 8:03:00 PM
wow this is an incredible makeover Eve absolutely wonderful imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/25/2015 8:44:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend. Blessings and hugs eve

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