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The Magic of Miss Winter

Miss Winter is here to spread her magic on my world that's far from homely, With her pure touch, she removes all tragic traces of the chilling lonely. As I walk on the frozen bridge, hiding my tears, I sense her soft caress, She takes my hands, and I go snow-sliding down behind her crystal white dress. She bathes me in snowdrops from head to toe, then helps me build my first snowman, Super-cool, she brings out my inner glow, together we make n-ice bright plans. She leads me to her world of frosty charm, like a mother leads her daughter, Miss Winter's magic love has made me warm, now, I'm filled with joy and laughter. ------------------------- 28.12.16 (Rhyme scheme: abab) (Syllables per stanza: 10 8 10 8)

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Date: 3/9/2017 11:56:00 AM
Great poetry - like the idea of winter being a "miss"! Like the n-ice bit! All the best Jo and congratulations! :-)
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Date: 3/9/2017 7:10:00 AM
Lovely poem Jo.
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Date: 1/14/2017 5:28:00 AM
I liked this poem very much :) Have a nice time.
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Date: 1/12/2017 8:34:00 PM
Jo, loe the female personification of winter here. Easy flowing with great visual imagery.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/12/2017 8:34:00 PM
OOPS....THAT SHOULD BE LOVE....
Date: 1/2/2017 6:30:00 AM
I love the personalization, the awesome imagery, and the way this poem moved me Jo. I agree with Andrea and CayCay, this needs to be on the winner's list. : ) 7
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Date: 1/2/2017 12:12:00 AM
I do believe that I believe what Andrea said is straight on true, this beauty is a winner. A lovely, charming and fully poetic poem that delighted me as a reader and a writer. What I cannot believe is that I have not read more of you before (maybe yes?, but don't recall). I am very impressed with this awesome poem ... CayCay
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Date: 1/1/2017 4:46:00 PM
I do believed I am reading a winning poem here. Wonderful, Jo!!
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Date: 12/30/2016 9:29:00 AM
Beautiful write... Wish you A Very Happy New Year to you and your family...
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Date: 12/29/2016 4:15:00 PM
Beautiful write Jo...Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/29/2016 1:34:00 PM
:) She surely has left her magic in the words of this beautiful poem, dear.
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Date: 12/29/2016 1:01:00 PM
Beautiful personification, Jo. Love it! As soon as things settle down after the end of this Holiday season, I will be posting Chapter Three of "Out of the Darkness". Wishing you all the best in the New Year. Elaine
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Date: 12/29/2016 7:09:00 AM
- A lovely and warm winter poem, Jo - Good luck in the contest - Thanks for the year 2016 ... looking forward to a new year with new poems and friendship :) - Best wishes for a happy new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/29/2016 4:08:00 AM
Lovely! Good luck for the contest!
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Date: 12/28/2016 4:27:00 PM
A great tribute to winter. Good luck in the context.
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Date: 12/28/2016 4:19:00 PM
beguiled by your metaphors and use of personification, jo... you shine!..huggs
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Date: 12/28/2016 1:12:00 PM
Clever, Jo...popular content. ;p ...good luck in the contest...deb
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Date: 12/28/2016 12:39:00 PM
Nature has it's way with all it's beauty and splendor of tapping into our inner beauty and Godly splendor, getting us back in touch with what is really important. God Bless!
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Date: 12/28/2016 11:40:00 AM
Winter's spell can even change cold to warmth, Jo! That's how it feels when, through your words, 'she' senses that you are like a daughter to her! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 12/28/2016 10:01:00 AM
Beautiful Jo. There is so much beauty and magic during the winter season and your poem brings it all to light wonderfully.
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