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The Macabre Massacre

What does a young naïve Christian think When a hooded desperado storms a prayer room, His scary presence quiets the praying tongues , And his outlawed round replaces hope with doom? He doesn’t think, instead he silently prays : Father, forgive their misinformed cruel idiocy, Teach these men that suicide is not an escape From the punishment for their bloody idiosyncrasy. What does an aging single mother think When the hope of a graduate daughter or son Turns out to be that unthinkable news of death, The bullet-riddled corpse, the end of the rising sun? She does not think, instead she miserably cries: Father, blight their brows with sulfurs hot, Numb their souls with the gall of unending pain, And their hope for bliss in death reduce to naught. What does the orphaned little boy or girl think When the bright elder sibling they adore Calls to say that she’s been forced to call And say goodbye before the triggers go? The orphaned boy or girl does not think, instead they howl: Father, tell the murderous killers to spare my sister For there is no-one else to wash my clothes And none to help with the assignments and dinner. And what does the heavenly merciful Creator think When the roars of guns and the sobs of death Force him to turn and cast his all-seeing eyes below To behold such thick-skinned extermination of breath? He does not think, instead he wonders: What breed of men is this I accidentally made, To wound and mutilate my innocent lambs, Rejoicing as their lives sorrowfully fade? (The massacre of well over 150 Garissa University College students by the Al-Shabaab militants on 2nd April 2015)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/17/2015 12:41:00 PM
As Dee said SO well written the end rhyme is not even noticeable, I too enjoy the end rhymed forms. I believe this happened also in Nigeria? The government killing an entire senior graduating class [then of course they have no rivals for power? yes?] Thank you Hann for reading my verses too. Light & Love
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Date: 4/17/2015 8:23:00 AM
I'd give this a ten, if I could. My silly verse compared to this???? You have proved me wrong without even knowing it. I have said rhyme is a waste, a tool to leave on the shelf. But you changed my mind!!!! When you have the other tools, yes, rhyme can still resonate as fresh, unpredictable and ... truly truly haunting. I'd never have thought to use rhyme on such a horror... but you've captured who they WERE, gave them LIFE and trumped their murders... God bless... never stop writing!!!
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Date: 4/17/2015 9:46:00 AM
Thanks for the comments, Cyndi. It took about a day to come up with the best way to capture the heart-wrenching massacre. I was drinking later on in the evening, and above the music and the noise, I heard the voices in the poem moan and mourn. I left tin a huff, and this is the product of my drinking cut short...
Date: 4/17/2015 8:20:00 AM
oooooooooooh, I'm gutted by this... ART! So much here! And you wove all the pain and the horror with the tenderness of a poet!!! I am directing a friend on Soup here. She must read this... you have a gift! Thank you for your comments because they directed me HERE.... You don't know me, but I rarely gush about a poem. It has to go right to my BONES, for me to say, beyond good... not a word I'd change.
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Date: 4/6/2015 3:45:00 PM
Hey Hannington, stopped by for a visit. This is a deeply emotional and heart wrenching piece from you. You have captured the thoughts and searing pain of such precious souls caught up in mindless tragedy. We must all keep them and their loved ones lifted up to our Heavenly Father who sees all. Beautifully written and expressed. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 4/4/2015 9:17:00 AM
God definitely is seeing and hearing and soon He is going to say enough..Great emotive and expressive work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/4/2015 6:39:00 AM
This is a powerful written poem after the Garissa tragedy. I havent even been able to watch news. As a matter of fact i havent watched news for over several months because its news like this that make me angry and depressed. Your pen has told it so well. All the prayers to loved ones.
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