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The love story

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The love story

Amidst lone stars i write your name Below the tide which stole your breath I seal my promise Close to you soon come to be in unknown place and empty hour Destiny betrayed our dreams,our hope and thoughts ,but not forever To those I love I bid farewell,last heartbeat faints so this soul lives in my beloved Not for the contest ,but thanks Alfred Vassallo for the inspiration through your new contest-abc poem about love

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  1. Date: 3/17/2014 7:43:00 PM
    Deep, moving My legs quiver!.... (Makes my toenails twinkle!)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 3:21:00 PM
    Only you are observing to the beautiful scene with love & respect . I am so much happy...Best wishes from India .

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 5:37:00 PM
    heartwarming beautiful piece

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 4:38:00 AM
    This is good beyond better!

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 9:52:00 PM
    your poem is so awesome Charma, and I love the inspiration behind it....xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 5:36:00 AM
    Sad and yet so beautiful Charma, absolutely love this :) hope you are doing good. love Wilma

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 1:33:00 AM
    HiCharma love other styles of poettry that i feel i cannot do, this is excellent really enjoyed the read, thanks for your comments also, have a great week, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 3:37:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:08:00 PM
    Ouch! This is soooo sad! I only believe in the destiny we make day by day. : )

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Impressive sad quality here. Magical almost in spite of it. I see a scene that tears my heart, but it is beautiful.

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 6:08:00 AM
    This is a beautiful love story...and sometimes love stories are sad. You've captured that everlasting quality well! Thanks for your visit to my work! :)

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 11:04:00 PM
    Beautiful write, you always know how to put such words in place. Beautiful poem! You are beautiful. - Edward

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 12:06:00 AM
    hey, come on, Enter it in the contest!!!

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 5/27/2013 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hey andie the only contest i entered was yours and i got a first place cause you were so kind to me..smikes.Other than that i entered only one wiyhout competition and because it was to honour Carolyn devonshire s poetry..You know me ..i dnt know why .Many says competitions are fun but for now i just write to support the others..hugs dear
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 2:14:00 AM
    Nice ABC poetry, hope for you in the contest

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 12:34:00 AM
    gosh, you got wonderfully inspired here., charma dear. It is always nice to get a visit from you!!!

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 9:11:00 PM
    Don't you ever bid farewell to me. A beautiful poem. Will write soon. a 7>> love terry xoxo

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 5/25/2013 2:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No i won t sweet lady..Just a sad poem but don t worry its fictional..hugs
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 3:55:00 PM
    Always a pleasure to read. Hope all is well with you! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 1:11:00 PM
    Breath-taking and as beautiful as the writer. So melancholy and classical this sad and beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 8:51:00 AM
    Ps., I Need Not To Tell You That 'Your Beauty,' Be A Favourite Poet Of Mine, Precious, Beautiful Tinkerbell!....

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 8:31:00 AM
    Tinkerbell, Don't Let The Gray Gloom Nor The Hopeless Drama, Steal Your Precious Heart's Enchanting Joy, Rather, Soar Through Fields And Meadows Green, Glittering Stars Whom Call To Thee, Baby Girl, Baby Girl, There's No Place Like Home, So, Come All Ye Faithful, Joyful As Triumphant, Hurry Along Now, Tinkerbell, Hurry Along ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Johnny *