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The Love Story

Amidst lone stars i write your name Below the tide which stole your breath I seal my promise Close to you soon come to be in unknown place and empty hour Destiny betrayed our dreams,our hope and thoughts ,but not forever To those I love I bid farewell,last heartbeat faints so this soul lives in my beloved Not for the contest ,but thanks Alfred Vassallo for the inspiration through your new contest-abc poem about love

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Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/17/2014 7:43:00 PM

Deep, moving My legs quiver!.... (Makes my toenails twinkle!)

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/10/2014 3:21:00 PM

Only you are observing to the beautiful scene with love & respect . I am so much happy...Best wishes from India .

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/15/2013 5:37:00 PM

heartwarming beautiful piece

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 9/3/2013 4:38:00 AM

This is good beyond better!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/9/2013 9:52:00 PM

your poem is so awesome Charma, and I love the inspiration behind it....xox~ Linda

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/25/2013 5:36:00 AM

Sad and yet so beautiful Charma, absolutely love this :) hope you are doing good. love Wilma

David Scott

Date: 6/14/2013 3:37:00 PM

NICE POEM YOU MIGHT LIKE MY POEM LOVE XX DAVIDSCOTT

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 5/27/2013 2:51:00 PM

Impressive sad quality here. Magical almost in spite of it. I see a scene that tears my heart, but it is beautiful.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/27/2013 6:08:00 AM

This is a beautiful love story...and sometimes love stories are sad. You've captured that everlasting quality well! Thanks for your visit to my work! :)

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/26/2013 11:04:00 PM

Beautiful write, you always know how to put such words in place. Beautiful poem! You are beautiful. - Edward

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2013 12:06:00 AM

hey, come on, Enter it in the contest!!!

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/27/2013 6:06:00 AM

hey andie the only contest i entered was yours and i got a first place cause you were so kind to me..smikes.Other than that i entered only one wiyhout competition and because it was to honour Carolyn devonshire s poetry..You know me ..i dnt know why .Many says competitions are fun but for now i just write to support the others..hugs dear

Mario De Paz

Date: 5/25/2013 2:14:00 AM

Nice ABC poetry, hope for you in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2013 12:34:00 AM

gosh, you got wonderfully inspired here., charma dear. It is always nice to get a visit from you!!!

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/24/2013 9:11:00 PM

Don't you ever bid farewell to me. A beautiful poem. Will write soon. a 7>> love terry xoxo

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/25/2013 2:39:00 AM

No i won t sweet lady..Just a sad poem but don t worry its fictional..hugs

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/24/2013 3:55:00 PM

Always a pleasure to read. Hope all is well with you! Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/24/2013 1:11:00 PM

Breath-taking and as beautiful as the writer. So melancholy and classical this sad and beautiful poem.

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/24/2013 7:30:00 AM

Should all moments of "love" be a Romeo & Juliet roller coaster? I ponder...wouldn't it be better to remember "love", the fuel of life, by simply living it while we're still here? As usual, your lines grace the eyes of all...mine included.

Nato Calubiran

Date: 5/24/2013 3:55:00 AM

What sad destiny. tsk3.