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The love story

Charmaine Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop  - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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The love story

Amidst lone stars i write your name Below the tide which stole your breath I seal my promise Close to you soon come to be in unknown place and empty hour Destiny betrayed our dreams,our hope and thoughts ,but not forever To those I love I bid farewell,last heartbeat faints so this soul lives in my beloved Not for the contest ,but thanks Alfred Vassallo for the inspiration through your new contest-abc poem about love

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  1. Date: 3/17/2014 7:43:00 PM
    Deep, moving My legs quiver!.... (Makes my toenails twinkle!)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 3:21:00 PM
    Only you are observing to the beautiful scene with love & respect . I am so much happy...Best wishes from India .

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 5:37:00 PM
    heartwarming beautiful piece

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 4:38:00 AM
    This is good beyond better!

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 9:52:00 PM
    your poem is so awesome Charma, and I love the inspiration behind it....xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 5:36:00 AM
    Sad and yet so beautiful Charma, absolutely love this :) hope you are doing good. love Wilma

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 1:33:00 AM
    HiCharma love other styles of poettry that i feel i cannot do, this is excellent really enjoyed the read, thanks for your comments also, have a great week, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 3:37:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 12:44:00 PM
    Romantic and beautiful. I hope it is only a poem. Please, read mine. Most of them you will like. Crow II, I made your laugh, Canon. I'll be glad to read from you. G.

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:08:00 PM
    Ouch! This is soooo sad! I only believe in the destiny we make day by day. : )

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Impressive sad quality here. Magical almost in spite of it. I see a scene that tears my heart, but it is beautiful.

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 6:08:00 AM
    This is a beautiful love story...and sometimes love stories are sad. You've captured that everlasting quality well! Thanks for your visit to my work! :)

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 11:04:00 PM
    Beautiful write, you always know how to put such words in place. Beautiful poem! You are beautiful. - Edward

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 12:06:00 AM
    hey, come on, Enter it in the contest!!!

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 5/27/2013 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hey andie the only contest i entered was yours and i got a first place cause you were so kind to me..smikes.Other than that i entered only one wiyhout competition and because it was to honour Carolyn devonshire s poetry..You know me ..i dnt know why .Many says competitions are fun but for now i just write to support the others..hugs dear
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 2:14:00 AM
    Nice ABC poetry, hope for you in the contest

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 12:34:00 AM
    gosh, you got wonderfully inspired here., charma dear. It is always nice to get a visit from you!!!

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 9:11:00 PM
    Don't you ever bid farewell to me. A beautiful poem. Will write soon. a 7>> love terry xoxo

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 5/25/2013 2:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No i won t sweet lady..Just a sad poem but don t worry its fictional..hugs
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 3:55:00 PM
    Always a pleasure to read. Hope all is well with you! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 1:11:00 PM
    Breath-taking and as beautiful as the writer. So melancholy and classical this sad and beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 8:51:00 AM
    Ps., I Need Not To Tell You That 'Your Beauty,' Be A Favourite Poet Of Mine, Precious, Beautiful Tinkerbell!....