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The Loud Cloud

Her cloud cloud came out proud and loud this afternoon... do not mind the clever coward, she will cow very soon. The dusky wind has got a ploy to paint the moon, Oh watch her drift away as the whirlwind croons! Doubters like fraudsters speculate on shadows dancings to the sweet songs of pilgrim sparrows, you have got no raindrops but you cleverly craft a rainbow while you drown in a daylight dream on your pillow Silence to you is not suspence but pure pretence your heart is immersed in impregnable impatience. A rose in the room you are, ripped of her radiance; why show up in the field, feigning fine fragrance?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/26/2012 8:17:00 AM
Another weekend is here and I have not read as many poems as I would have liked to this week. I am happy I was able to read yours today. Have a wonderful weekend Adeleke it is great to see you here at the Soup. Hopefully I will be able to read more next week. Love, Carol
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