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The Lost Soul

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The Lost Soul

On the day I go you wont,
see a smile because it is hidden.
In all this pain and sorrow it is making me
loose my mind.
I don't know where my life is heading.
I've been lost for to long.
I just wish I could see that bright light again.

As I sit here in the dark.
Wondering why I stick around
Nobody notices that all I do is cry
on the inside.
I'm starting to wonder why I can't
escape the dark forest it just keeps going
on as I'm in an endless attempt to escape.

My guardian angel watches over me
but sometimes I don't think that's enough.
As you see I have lost my mind, I am going
crazy I don't know how to get out of this
The darkness just follows me wherever I go.
As I travel on my own I wonder what was
best for me but I haven't found the right path yet.

Everyone tells me its going to be okay
but its not.
They don't understand how much this is hurting me.
Every night I sit here crying you just don't notice the tears.
I feel so unloved, so ashamed.
I know I've screwed up my own life but what you don't know
is that I've tried to fix it.
I just wish I could find my way out of this forest.

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  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:01:00 PM
    Please don't ever quit looking for that light til you come out of this sad sad forest. Welcome to PoetrySoup,pal. I hope you find inspiration in the works of your co-poets around here as much as I did in yours. Just a tip to help you get by,Mark: You have to go to the poet who made a comment to your poem if you desire to respond because we don't get to read your response at all to our comments if you just hit "Reply to comment." Enjoy!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 6:58:00 AM
    A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Mark. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 06/24/2012

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 6:25:00 AM
    Sad, but well done Mark. Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 5:08:00 AM
    touchg feel.We all feel lost sometimes but its we who hav to fight against the weaknes and come out of it.Its never too late.

    hiltermann Avatar mark hiltermann
    Date: 6/21/2012 5:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you I know what you mean but not everyone believes in themselves enough to fight against it