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The Lost Girl

My Angel remain strong, Though things seem hard, In time they will come, Live each day as it comes, Never dwell on what has happened, For time will heal your wounds, Remember there will be someone guiding you and protecting you, So you need never feel alone, Sleep now and forget, For in your dreams you will see your true potential, And no that your will shall never be broken, Sleep now and never forget the ones, who truly love you, Even if you don’t feel the same,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/16/2016 12:43:00 AM
James,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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James Myers
Date: 7/21/2016 10:33:00 AM
Thank you for this. I'm happy to receive any criticism, it is the only way you can improve. All poems I write have been based on my personal life specially while I was at school and college, I went through a lot while I was younger such as bullying and the only way I could overcome it was through my poetry. I wrote a lot of poems all based on personal issues I had. I just hope all can enjoy the words I write and some may even relate.
Date: 7/13/2016 10:25:00 AM
great 1st poem keep them coming stephen
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Date: 7/13/2016 4:58:00 AM
Thank you all for your words of inspiration, I was always worried that my poems wouldn't liked. I hope I can share my collection with the whole community, as I have many more to share.
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Date: 7/13/2016 4:53:00 AM
What a lovely first submission, James, gentle and full of hope. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I'm sure that you'll enjoy your time here, reading and sharing with this jolly band of wordsmiths. Have fun. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/11/2016 1:00:00 PM
- I enjoy reading your first beautiful poem, you write great James :) - Warm welcome to Poetry - Soup :) - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 7/11/2016 10:15:00 AM
James,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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James Myers
Date: 7/11/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thank you for those kind words, I hope to share my love of poems to all.

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