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The Loneliness of Sex

You were naively Half, oblivious to little quirks. Thn you met another Half, a way to feel whole beyond quirks. And so you gave and gave some more, opening up room for completeness. Now, they are gone. The pulsating quirks are alone, alone like never before they knew you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/6/2012 2:33:00 PM
Very hard-hitting...great job Sue!
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Date: 12/24/2011 8:55:00 PM
Nice,, ... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.
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Date: 11/24/2010 6:00:00 PM
very good my friend thank you
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Date: 7/25/2010 5:57:00 AM
A meaningful write. I love the use of language - makes me think.
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Date: 7/19/2010 10:08:00 AM
Thought provoking piece Sue, enjoyed your write.. Wilma
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:40:00 AM
Half and half met - nice expression and then the yearning for it.
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:05:00 AM
Interesting write, alot to think about...Michael
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