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The Lone Boy

As I sat on the cold metal bar, the sounds of my friends faded out of my radar. I observed the boy in the discolored yellow hat who didn't want to disappoint, crouching with his head tilted to a certain point. He had intense brown eyes the color of a baseball mound, and unlike the others never made much of a sound. On one hand he wore an old brown mitt, which most likely had been his father's and didn't quite fit. I couldn't tell you if he could hit or throw, whether he was fast or slow. If he had any loved ones cheering in the park, or whether he had a known trademark. All I know is he stood out that much was clear, with his determined expression and it being his first year. He crouched in wait the last in the player line, hoping one day he'd have his moment to shine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/16/2015 9:26:00 PM
HANNAH :) CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN...... SKAT
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Date: 12/16/2015 2:41:00 PM
Fantastic flow to this, well done.
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Date: 12/14/2015 11:17:00 PM
Hannah, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/12/2015 10:09:00 PM
Hi Hannah,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Hannah Pearl
Date: 12/13/2015 9:44:00 AM
Thanks for the warm welcome!

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