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The Lives of Two Great People

I know you and I
Never got together
So well
But if you get
A second chance
Let us please
Try to push away
Our differences
And start over
Without the yelling

You are younger
Than me
But that never
Made a difference
Of how we would fight
With punches and kicking
Choking one another
As if it was all
One big game

I want you both to know
That I love you
With all my heart
And hope you will come back
So we can start new
You have the lives
Of two great people
My friends
My brothers
I love you 

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  1. Date: 1/9/2010 3:33:00 PM
    it touches my heart that you're making up. i hope they've read this! ------Ell

  1. Date: 1/9/2010 2:28:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing a piece of your heart in your poetry with us Allison. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/9/2010 12:44:00 AM
    Very well written and emotionally honest Allison. I hope all works out. Best Wishes Always, Bill