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The Little Fir Tree

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The Little Fir Tree

There was a plantation of fir trees
for some unknown reason, most of them
were three to four years old but one,
it was only in its first year of growth.

When Christmas drew near, the loggers came
and started to cut down some of the oldest.
The little fir asked "What is going on?"
The other trees said its Christmas time.

They will be taken into people's homes 
then they will be decorated and lit up.
Parcels at their feet sharing the joy
of Christmas, a real honour to be chosen.

"I want to be a Christmas tree," said the fir.
You are much too young and far too little,
they take most trees when they are four,
you will have to wait and do some growing.

"I want it to be spring, it said not winter
then I will be able to grow big like you".
Soon the loggers had finished cutting down,
now there were large gaps in the rows.

The little fir thought lots of sun helps,
at last the spring came and with it growth.
The little fir stretched as high as it could
filling out as it reached upwards for the sun.

In the morning men came and started to plant
soon there were lots of little trees around.
One worker said," strange there is one little one
should we cut it down". "No leave it to grow bigger".

The little fir grew all through the summer
enjoying the hot lazy days while it could,
it saw many changes over the weeks and months
as autumn passed away the land cooled down.

Then came the snows of winter, a blizzard or two
the snow lay heaped around the little fir's roots.
It will soon be time for the loggers to come
then all us four year old's will be Christmas trees.

"I wish I could be a Christmas tree like all of you".
"You will have to grow a lot more before they take you".
The little tree sighed, it so badly wanted to be one,
next day the loggers came and took the older trees.

Once more the rows looked very bare and also bleak,
the little tree hunkered down to wait for spring.
Then one day a little girl and her dad came
they walked down the rows looking at all the trees.

"That one", she shouted, "dad", pointing at the little fir.
"It is rather small, would you not like a bigger one".
"No, no", said the little girl, "that one is perfect.
I can reach to do most of the decorating of it's branches".

Fantastic thought the little tree, I am a Christmas tree
they gently cut it down and carried it to their truck,
when they got home they put some growth power on the base
and planted it in a great big pot that was a shiny red.

The tree looked around the room in awe struck wonder
there were flashing lights around the snowy windows.
Cards strung over the fire mantle, so very colourful,
streamers hung from corner to corner looking so gay.

Then they started to put baubles, tinsel and lights
and a lovely angel to go on the top it felt so good,
at last the little fir would know what Christmas
was like, it watched all the fun as the presents.

Were passed around and eagerly opened with sighs
and shouts of delight, the tree smiled at their joy.
Now finally they sat down and ate their dinner
with many toasts being passed, at last it was over.

Then next day they took the little fir outside
and put it in a cold frame to protect it for the winter. 
oh wow! it thought I will be a Christmas tree again next year
and so the little fir tree got it's dearest wish.

written 12/20/2013 

contest Children's Christmas or holiday Tale

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  1. Date: 12/7/2014 8:19:00 PM
    I love happy endings. Congratulations on your win Shadow. I enjoyed reading your lovely story.

  1. Date: 12/7/2014 2:29:00 PM
    Great Story, love the happy ending! Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 12/7/2014 8:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Shadow...a lovely story

  1. Date: 12/6/2014 11:17:00 PM
    Chance for the old and the young but appointed time,thank you for this wonderful Story; congrats on the win Shadow...huggs

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/6/2014 11:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Kayod hugs
  1. Date: 12/6/2014 8:57:00 AM
    Congratulations, Shadow, enjoyed the story. Blessings eve

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/6/2014 11:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Eve hugs
  1. Date: 12/6/2014 8:39:00 AM
    Very charming story well told, congrats on the win

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/6/2014 11:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Ram hugs
  1. Date: 12/6/2014 8:38:00 AM
    I remember this one, so good to see it on the winners list!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/6/2014 11:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Rick one of my own favs hugs
  1. Date: 12/5/2014 9:23:00 PM
    A great story and win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/6/2014 11:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Joyce hugs
  1. Date: 12/5/2014 5:00:00 PM
    congratulations on your #1 win,much deserved

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/6/2014 11:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Robert hugs
  1. Date: 12/5/2014 3:57:00 PM
    what a charming story Shadow - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/6/2014 11:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Jan hugs
  1. Date: 4/22/2014 1:05:00 PM
    Wonderful story Shadow...congrats on the win

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/6/2014 11:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Joseph hugs
  1. Date: 4/22/2014 6:35:00 AM
    Congrats on your win!! The story of the little fir tree has such a wonderful ending, and is such a cute Christmas story. I really enjoyed it! ~Heather

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/6/2014 11:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Heather hugs
  1. Date: 4/22/2014 12:09:00 AM
    Shadow, Congratulations on your placement in the contest! RAY

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/6/2014 11:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Ray hugs
  1. Date: 4/21/2014 10:15:00 PM
    Easily can imagine this on the shelf at Branes and Noble.. Start looking for an illustrator and publisher.. Obvious winner Shadow!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/6/2014 11:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Dave hugs
  1. Date: 12/19/2013 12:26:00 AM
    This was totally adorable. You should illustrate it and do it as a children's book. I just love it! Fav for sure.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/19/2013 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes it was an excellent visit, thanks for asking.
    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/19/2013 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Rick glad you like it ty too for favoring it hope you had good time with your mum Season's greetings to you and yours Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 3:46:00 PM
    wow, lucky for that tree they made it possible for it to enjoy the Christmas next year. a lot of trees dont' get to be that lucky. This was adorable!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/18/2013 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you know me Andrea I like to put a twist on the usual lol ty dear Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 5:14:00 AM
    Fantastic flight of imagination and feelings to personify a fir tree, Shadow

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/17/2013 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Ram I wanted to write something a bit different about fir trees ty for reading Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 9:22:00 PM
    You tell a great Christmas story, loved the history of the little fir tree, if only all firs ended this way, nicely done Shadow, this is full of creative juice for us to enjoy xxx

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/17/2013 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Vienna and ty too many end up in the tip Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 4:36:00 PM
    Shadow, this is such a beautiful little story you have written here. I enjoyed every word of it. wonderful write...Peter

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/16/2013 4:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Peter ty I really appreciate your feedback Shadow x smile