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The Last Walk In the Dark

Washed away in the rain... Only scars from the pain... Trickling down are new smiles... A soul stretched out for miles... Bent in two from harsh lonely days... Those little demons had their ways... Spikes of fear can never again penetrate... Pushed to the edge but I will never hate... A floorless walk over hot coals... But in the end that's how I roll...

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/29/2013 3:19:00 PM

This is very good, I enjoyed it very much. I like the way you roll.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/30/2012 8:38:00 PM

My Goodness; What a poem. I just loved it. Thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla

Cory Long

Date: 11/16/2012 12:33:00 PM

this is awesome Michael, hope all is well.. Hugs cory

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/16/2012 9:44:00 AM

Hi Michael, seems I lost you for awhile but lucky I came and found this gem. So full of hope and ready to disperse the sad memories. Such a nice one to read!

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/15/2012 4:24:00 AM

In the end that's how we grow. Awesome piece MJF :) hope your day is a brilliant one :) love CTH

Lillie Williams

Date: 11/14/2012 3:00:00 PM

Wow! I like that ending. The whole writing is incredible to me. I like the beginning to the end. You write very well. Thanks Michael. :-)

Constance La France

Date: 11/14/2012 2:35:00 PM

Michael, an outstanding write with many wonderful lines, I relate to your words very much Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2012 11:11:00 PM

Nice to see you posting recently, and what inspired this one, Michael? You have great creativity.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2012 5:53:00 PM

FLOWING EMBERS OF LOVE PAST SPILLING INTO NOW AND NEW AND RENEWAL .. LOVELY COUPLET LINES OF SHEER EMOTION AND DEPTH MICHAEL LUV .. JG IS SO ENJOYING YOUR THOUGHTS .. FOREVER XOXO..

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/13/2012 12:04:00 PM

I love the last line a lot my friend, "...that's how I roll..."! Ha! This is a special and delightful poem! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous and amazing piece this afternoon! What a brilliant write, Great Work!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/13/2012 9:38:00 AM

like this Michael, blends very well together, with a wonderful flow...

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 11/13/2012 9:45:00 AM

Thank you Harry...

Robert Ludden

Date: 11/13/2012 9:35:00 AM

Stanza 3---"there"... should be "their"

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 11/13/2012 9:40:00 AM

poetic freedom lol