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The Last Walk In The Dark

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The Last Walk In The Dark

Washed away in the rain...
Only scars from the pain...

Trickling down are new smiles...
A soul stretched out for miles...

Bent in two from harsh lonely days...
Those little demons had their ways...

Spikes of fear can never again penetrate...
Pushed to the edge but I will never hate...

A floorless walk over hot coals...
But in the end that's how I roll...

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  1. Date: 3/29/2013 3:19:00 PM
    This is very good, I enjoyed it very much. I like the way you roll.

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 8:38:00 PM
    My Goodness; What a poem. I just loved it. Thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 2:58:00 PM
    Awesome! Simply awesome piece of poetry my brother.Emotional poem filled with power and honesty.We`re doing good over here Michael,enjoying a peaceful Saturday evening! Take care over there my friend..Arild

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 12:33:00 PM
    this is awesome Michael, hope all is well.. Hugs cory

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 9:44:00 AM
    Hi Michael, seems I lost you for awhile but lucky I came and found this gem. So full of hope and ready to disperse the sad memories. Such a nice one to read!

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 4:24:00 AM
    In the end that's how we grow. Awesome piece MJF :) hope your day is a brilliant one :) love CTH

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:00:00 PM
    Wow! I like that ending. The whole writing is incredible to me. I like the beginning to the end. You write very well. Thanks Michael. :-)

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 2:35:00 PM
    Michael, an outstanding write with many wonderful lines, I relate to your words very much Constance

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 11:11:00 PM
    Nice to see you posting recently, and what inspired this one, Michael? You have great creativity.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:53:00 PM
    FLOWING EMBERS OF LOVE PAST SPILLING INTO NOW AND NEW AND RENEWAL .. LOVELY COUPLET LINES OF SHEER EMOTION AND DEPTH MICHAEL LUV .. JG IS SO ENJOYING YOUR THOUGHTS .. FOREVER XOXO..

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:04:00 PM
    I love the last line a lot my friend, "...that's how I roll..."! Ha! This is a special and delightful poem! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous and amazing piece this afternoon! What a brilliant write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 9:38:00 AM
    like this Michael, blends very well together, with a wonderful flow...

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/13/2012 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Harry...
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 9:35:00 AM
    Stanza 3---"there"... should be "their"

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/13/2012 9:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    poetic freedom lol