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The Last Mistake

28 Feb 2011 9:45 AM When the strong are weak dose that make you depressed? When the hope filled become the hopeless Do you see them as a mess When the ones you look up to fall and fail to live up to Do you run away from them or do you run to When your teacher fails to be wise Do you still admire or do you dispise Do you think what you thought was wise or is it now all lies Ups and downs is the lives of us all No one is perfect no one at all Everyone excells and everyone falls Those that fail and try again learn well the lessons of mistakes Those that fail and then give up can never see past that one mistake When you fail and fail you will get up and try again success will come when you make the last mistake.

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Date: 6/6/2012 8:25:00 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be amazing Bobb . Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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