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The Last Gift

The scent of crispy sizzling bacon filled my nose, warm sweet pancakes being made in the kitchen. I walked down the stairs, my heart filled with joy as I saw the presents under the tree. Big and small boxes, all different sizes wrapped in colorful wrapping paper. We spent all day long opening gifts, but apart of me was upset I didn't get the one thing I asked for. I laid down on the couch, my dog sniffing away under the tree, yapping. I went to see what he was looking at when I saw one last box. A perfect little box in blue sparkly snowflake wrapping paper, topped with a silver glistening bow. I looked to see who it was for, my eyes filled with tears when Santa saved the last gift for me.

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Date: 1/11/2015 10:08:00 PM
Courtney,, Congratulations on your Christmas Daze win, Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/9/2015 7:22:00 PM
Thank you for sharing these wonderful Christmas memories with us, Courtney. Very nicely written! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:22:00 PM
wonderful imagery a charming write - saving the best till last - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2014 10:16:00 AM
The best for last, such a wonderful feeling, to never be forgotten, Blessings and Happy New Year
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Date: 12/20/2014 9:53:00 AM
This is deep, Courtney Dean, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward to following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/20/2014 8:04:00 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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