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The Last Day

The day I died with tear I wept feeling pain on my each step an irrational fear going at real depth of my heart and my mind oh god! I cried the day I died. A rue spirit in my voice I cried once or twice tears ran down my cheeks I felt helpless and lost didn‘t knew where to seek the day I died. I implored to mighty to yield some relief, please. No sign came upon I waited from dusk till dawn and when bright sun arose I permit my eyes to close That day I died.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/1/2015 12:02:00 AM
AKSHAY, :) Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 6/12/2015 11:12:00 PM
I knew nothing of this contest but do agree that this is a great poem.... A7 And congrats on writing this gem..
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Akshay Rawat
Date: 6/15/2015 2:36:00 AM
thank you Robert.
Date: 6/12/2015 9:33:00 PM
Hi, Akshay, this happens to be Linda's pick, we both picked a number one poem for this particular contest. Only she knows why, she choose this one? I love it and agreed with her. Congratulations, on your first place win. SKAT
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Akshay Rawat
Date: 6/15/2015 2:37:00 AM
Thank you both linda and skat. love you.

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