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The Last Dance

Flickering flames, shadows dancing in vain. For their stories that unfold shall never again be told. Melancholy moves the breeze. An invitation to the last dance, of a soon to be forgotten, romance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/30/2015 4:34:00 PM
Lovely
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Date: 9/30/2015 1:37:00 PM
"It flows"
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Date: 9/30/2015 9:40:00 AM
I enjoy the imagery of melancholy moves the breeze.
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:12:00 AM
Well done Yoshi. It's terse and precise yet leaving room for one to wonder. Isn't that the work of a poem? To raise questions in answers and letting people find their own place in it? I like it buddy. Kudos.
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Date: 6/15/2015 11:48:00 AM
Sad but well penned.
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