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The Land of the Broken Hearted

Today, I start my journey From the place I'm going to miss My bags are packed with grief As I leave this land of bliss It's the loneliest of journeys And my ship has now departed As the waves of sorrow break On the shores of the broken hearted The cold dry breeze of misery Blows between my heart and soul And carries off my spirit To a place I do not know The sky is always gray Even when the clouds have parted All color, loses hue In the land of the broken hearted I can drink from all its rivers But there's salt in every drop I can eat all I want But the hunger never stops Regret is my companion Makes me wish I never started On that lonely road towards love To the land of the broken hearted Where leafless trees won't grow And the ground is black with sorrow The stream of tears will flow From today into tomorrow It's the loneliest of journey's And once it has been charted There's just no turning back From the land of the broken hearted

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Date: 5/25/2014 5:29:00 PM
While sad, I do love the fine picture you painted. We all know some form of heartache and sorrow, so this speaks much truth. Wish you the best. Wonderful write dear friend. Jess
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/25/2014 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Jessica, I never intend on writing sad poems, but I write what I am compelled too. This stuff just comes to me.
Date: 5/24/2014 8:30:00 AM
I hate that land....Trying to hitch hike back to the land of love but no one will pick me up.....tremendous write my friend
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/25/2014 12:14:00 PM
Thanks Tim, When you least expect it, expect it,
Date: 5/23/2014 7:57:00 PM
This is the exact journey im on Jerry, i can relate too well to every word, very well done , blessings, Carl
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/24/2014 5:34:00 AM
I'm glad you like the poem, but sorry you have to live it. Thank Carl, hope things get better for you.

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