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The Lady of the Lake

He did not hear her foot falls, for he lay immersed in water. She stepped soft under the starry vault The lady of the lake. He had disturbed her si- lent lake with his loud cries and splashing. She came with one simple goal in mind: to kill the tresspasser. But when she got close to his noble face, eyes closed and floating, she did not feel aught but love for him. Her new lord of the Lake
*Do people think that I should write another verse about her acidentally drowning him, or about a wife that she stole him from?*

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Date: 12/12/2011 2:24:00 PM
I think the poem is fine without another verse. What gave you the inspiration for this work? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Grace Williams
Date: 12/12/2011 4:45:00 PM
Well, every day this month I am writing a poem in a different style. An epyllion sounded fun. It ntailed a narative poem about romance or myth and so I picked a theme that had both: the Artherian legends. There is loads of great poetry about the main characters, so I decided to write about someone who is less well known but still cool. The lady of the lake never really got a love story, so I made one up.
Date: 12/11/2011 11:57:00 AM
* "PS. * THANK YOU FOR YOUR LOVELY BEAUTIES KIND VISIT & COM * ALSO, I AM SORRY IF MY OWN COMMENT BROUGHT ABOUT A BIT OF CONFUSION * SOME TIMES I JUST BABBLE ON *.* STAY BEAUTIFUL & KEEP PAINTING * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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Date: 12/11/2011 11:06:00 AM
* "SOMETIMES WHAT MAY HAVE BEEN & BEEN EXPECTED * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL GRACE * VEERS ITS COURSE UNTO A NEW DAYS DAWNING * AND WHOM CAN TRULY SAY WHAT THE MOMENT SHALL OFFER ONE * VERY FASCINATING & QUITE LOVELY THIS IMAGE * HAPPY HOLIDAYS * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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