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The Kiss of Life

It felt like I was actually diving into the abysses Touges start rolling, but it was my actual first kiss A feeling when every limb in your body goe’s weak Up until then it was nothing but a peck on the cheek And she asked why I was shaking, what's wrong Still now I wonder why I was waiting for that long Because I never knew of anything so bliss or rife That first kiss brought in me a new lease of life And what I felt was a shiver, was a feeling of rejoice And you could hear the quiver that was in my voice At first it was freighting, not knowing what to expect But too it was exciting when to sets of lips connect A guy who meets this girl and gets lost in thy embrace A syh,and a murmur her mouth soft and sweet the taste Our heads moving right to left, stroking each others hair A loss of breath, but I don't ever want to come up for air And it's something I still miss, you know when she left me Has to be better than the kiss of death, just like poison ivy Mesmerizing, no one before has ever felt quit the same Satisfying ,maybe she was familiar with the kissing game I KIND OF LEFT THIS TILL THE LAST MINITE SO PROBABLY NOT A GREAT DEAL OF THOUGHT OR THOUGH I DID TRY TO DELVE DEEP IN TO THIS TO CAPTURE THAT ELEMENT THIS FOR THE POET DESTROYERS CONTEST THE KISSING GAME WRITTEN AUGUST 2012................... p.s use'd your title at end as could not find words to finish but thought also it would be a nice homage to your self x david scott this is actually based on a true event back in february i1998 which Ive probably mentioned about her in other poems ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Date: 4/10/2013 4:33:00 AM
wow,wow,wow....beautiful kiss...that etches a beautiful memory..i soo love the piece..beautiful write Dave :-)
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Date: 2/14/2013 8:45:00 AM
A kiss can mean so much and to.others it can mean so little.but the first kiss will alwsys be remembered and usually it wont be the last.So sentimental Scott
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