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The Kiss At the Tor

My soul was on fire, as I entered the wood By the old rusty gate, which silently stood Absorbing history, making no choice Passing no judgement, adding no voice The rough ancient path, veined with roots To test my step, or scuff my boots Unhurriedly followed the line of the brook But this was not the path I took I turned to the right, climbed up through the trees Where bracken and brambles tugged at my knees ‘til I reached the edge of the open moor And strode on up to the lonely tor Where first we kissed on that moonlit night Where you held me close, as I held you tight That was the moment I was truly born My life before you had been tattered and torn You gave me the courage to truly be me You gave me your love unconditionally Yes, my soul was on fire, as you came into view On the edge of the rock, by the magical yew And I knew, as then, you were only her ghost The spirit of the one I have loved the most

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/3/2009 1:53:00 PM
Nice work and best of luck in the next round...Raul
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Date: 4/27/2009 3:38:00 PM
Beautiful write that is now a "first round survivor" ... smile ... great work, Nigel and good luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/31/2009 6:19:00 AM
Congrats once again dear Nigel on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/18/2008 3:45:00 AM
Nigel, your work has a lot of depth, you have an amazing talent, Thanks for sharing it with the world. You know not the enormous contribution you are making to the world of literature. Many generations to come will know of your time. Thank you so much for gracing me with your appreciated comments. Take care and may God continue to bless you and your sacrifices. I too, know the sacrifices and time spent for the dream of writing. Thanks again...Raul
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Date: 12/9/2008 9:54:00 AM
Oh Nigel, this is so beautifully written. The rich imagery and the bittersweet feelings of love lost wraps you up and fills your heart as you read this. Excellent write. Love Robin
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Date: 11/13/2008 3:26:00 PM
Congrats on this compelling write. Shades of Wuthering Heights. The path taken is what charges the imagination. Bravo. Love, daver
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Date: 11/10/2008 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations Nigel for your great poem being featured :) Regards, Teri
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Date: 11/10/2008 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations Nigel...this one I missed last time , so I'm glad to have a chance to enjoy it! A wonderful poem to be featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/10/2008 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations Nigel on your excellent poetry being featured this week. I must agree very much with Frank's comment. Awesome write! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/10/2008 3:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week.Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2008 12:36:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Nigel.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/9/2008 4:22:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. Interesting reflection on love. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 10/24/2008 9:40:00 PM
rymes just flowed so well! enjoyed much thanks and tanks for your comments!
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