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The Kind of Guy

You used to be the kind of boy to hum to any tune, the special kind of boy who painted pictures of the moon, the one who saw a broken heart a way to make things right, for to a darkened room all your smiles gave off light. The guy who's caring words could set the people free, the guys who separates the treasure from the sea. The kind who imagines up special kinds of views, and these are all the reasons that your still the one I choose.

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Date: 10/20/2016 6:07:00 AM
Nice ideal of a dream man
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Rainbow Music
Date: 10/20/2016 7:54:00 PM
LOL, Thanks =)
Date: 10/20/2016 5:53:00 AM
nice
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Date: 10/13/2016 12:03:00 AM
Oh women has weird ideas of "that kind of guy of at times"...hope men understand this and keep up to it! :D Enjoyed it.Congrats
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Date: 10/8/2016 4:45:00 PM
Rainbow Music, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/8/2016 10:38:00 AM
Thank you all so much for the encouragement! It means a lot. =)
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Date: 10/8/2016 7:12:00 AM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 10/7/2016 11:39:00 PM
Rainbow Music, yr, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/7/2016 9:00:00 PM
I'm a musician trying to become a songwriter. I sing and play many instruments such as the piano, French horn, recorder, and a little drums. Poetry brings me one step closer to becoming a songwriter. Thank you to all who will encourage me to do my best, and I hope I encourage you all in return. Thanks so much! -RainbowMusic
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