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The Key Holder

Open A gate, a key To greater turmoil Overture to greater beauty Unspoiled. Fear not Discovery When your eyes look upon Rough trail, hiding territory Beyond. Count not, Walk regardless Of the pros and the cons Dreams are in the making, unless You doubt. Seek Ye That gate, that key That you may come to know Treasure untold; that ye the key Do hold. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 04.07.11

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Date: 4/12/2011 7:38:00 PM
creative piece of work
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:16:00 PM
Dear Caroline, I got your message and be assured it will take time to feel whole again. Shorter relationships seem to take less time. My prayers are with you. Love, Carolynx
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:01:00 PM
That's good advice. It was given me when I was younger but as with Daver I guell I thought it did not pertain to me and was always afraid to try. Strange phenomenon but not rare. enjoyed the poem Caroline.
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:08:00 AM
I like the positive tone of this one. My whole life I was afraid to do many things - write, compose music, paint. When I retired I tried all of the above and had a ball doing it. Love, Dave
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Date: 4/8/2011 7:54:00 AM
As this week draws to an end here I sit reading such amazing poetry. I am happy yours is one of the ones I am reading today Caroline. I wish you a healthy, joyful, inspiration filled weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2011 7:01:00 AM
Nice expressions of hope and inspirations, Caroline
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Date: 4/7/2011 8:45:00 PM
Exquisite words create great imagery about this key Caroline.. this form used is perfect to convey inner thoughts my friend..enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 4/7/2011 3:53:00 PM
Inspiring in so many ways, Caroline. I do believe we hold the keys to our own fate, but sometimes fear has us making poor choices. Love, Carolyn
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