The Just King

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THE JUST KING

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

Absolute monarch he is His subjects the law obey For equally are treated, Death is the just king! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 12 August 2016 7-7-7-5

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Date: 8/13/2016 1:47:00 AM

Right on. Wonderfully put. Have a great weekend

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/13/2016 11:36:00 AM

Have a wonderful weekend my friend, John! Thank you!

Date: 8/12/2016 1:27:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2016 3:39:00 PM

Thank you dear, Ronald, for your delightful visit!

Date: 8/12/2016 11:01:00 AM

- Great & deep, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2016 3:40:00 PM

Thank you my dearest Anne-Lise for your gracious visit. Hugs!

Date: 8/12/2016 9:04:00 AM

Glad I stopped by to read this wonderful piece. Have a blessed weekend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/13/2016 11:40:00 AM

Glad you have done so my friend, Tim! Thank you!

Date: 8/12/2016 7:45:00 AM

Indeed!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/13/2016 11:40:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Richard!

Date: 8/12/2016 5:43:00 AM

Precisely so ... Nice Dodoitsu ... so this 7-7-7-5 is a very good support for cute little poems ... Enjoyed it ... Thanks ...