The Jump

A wind gust and glare, Insides begin to float, Adrenaline pulse,

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2016 11:09:00 PM

Wise Doane, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 5/12/2016 10:02:00 AM

Wise D, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/2/2012 8:30:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Wise. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Ann Roske

Date: 4/2/2012 7:49:00 AM

Sounds like bungee jumping! Nice write - welcome to soup.