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I have been on a long journey The road I have travelled has been a rocky one I have wept my tears My sky black as ink In a life of dangerous curves and hanging cliffs And deep sadness and grief A giant storm all around me and swirling clouds But it seems that I am a survivor of yesterdays It is time for me to fly It is time to open my eyes and take a leap A plunge into the unknown and to believe in me To soar and find myself No more will I hang my head like a dying flower I have made peace with the past at last The door is padlocked and chained Nightmares and ghosts must hide away Now it is time to make each moment count It is limitless where I will go One day at a time and one step at a time I will float like a ship in a shoreless sea This journey begins within me I want to make a difference in the world But accept that it is not a race But the dance of life I want to enjoy the journey Each and every little stepping stone Time for this butterfly to try her wings My life will be full of open spaces And I will drift with the storms in life And just hop a ride upon a cloud I am ready to sail across the sky ______________________________ November 8, 2015 Free Verse For the contest, The Journey Begins, sponsor Matt Caliri Fourth Place

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Date: 11/17/2015 10:01:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations, SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2015 1:11:00 AM
Thank you for the congrats ~
Date: 11/17/2015 1:49:00 PM
CONGRATS!!!! Very beautiful piece Broken Wings:) You continue to amaze me my friend... -LU xxx
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Constance La France
Date: 11/17/2015 3:15:00 PM
Laura, thanks so much for the nice comment and congratulations
Date: 11/12/2015 9:04:00 PM
Good luck on making Peace with the Past and Keep that padlock on! You traced from what used to happen, to what you intend to do on correcting it, and burst right into liberated Freedom! Nice write and a 7.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/13/2015 4:34:00 PM
Rainbow, thanks for much for the visit and the nice comment and the 7, appreciate ~
Date: 11/12/2015 12:55:00 PM
I never have believed in angels until now. You inspire me and make me feel good. Your poetry is magic. May your wishes all come true and may you soar. You have already made a huge difference. Today, you have brought me peace and tranquility. Thank-you so very much for being here. You really make a difference.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/12/2015 1:59:00 PM
Duke, thanks you for the beautiful comment, my poem of hope, hopefully I can fly away from the past and follow my own words ~
Date: 11/11/2015 2:32:00 PM
Wings, a welcome note! Looking forward to your sailing to newer shores! balveen
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Constance La France
Date: 11/11/2015 3:32:00 PM
Thank you for the visit
Date: 11/8/2015 6:47:00 PM
To break through a door of sad reflection and step into the light of tomorrow is a gift one gives themselves for being strong in the storms of life.
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Date: 11/8/2015 7:32:00 PM
Frederic, that is so nice, I love what you wrote, thank you ~
Date: 11/8/2015 3:31:00 PM
"I will float like a ship in a shoreless sea" that is a fantastic line. Well done free verse, BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2015 3:35:00 PM
Thank you sweet Lin ...
Date: 11/8/2015 11:49:00 AM
An awesome mixture of imagination and cruel reality, Wings!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2015 3:34:00 PM
Oh I give up
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Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2015 2:54:00 PM
Of course I mean Tamiya, darn cell phone !
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Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2015 11:54:00 AM
Tasking, thanks for visiting my poetry ..
Date: 11/8/2015 9:59:00 AM
From the picture, anticipating a great write. Best wishes for the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2015 10:12:00 AM
Thank you for visiting Rainbow, the poem is completed now, please return if you have time ~

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