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The Journey Begins

The first cry, lungs fill For that moment, perfection The journey begins….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/21/2015 10:48:00 AM
Absolute beauty with brevity. That moment...
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Date: 11/17/2015 10:02:00 PM
Barbara, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
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Date: 11/17/2015 3:59:00 PM
Short and perfect, congrats! -LU xxx *smiles*
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Date: 11/17/2015 7:32:00 AM
Lovely Senryu Barbara.
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Date: 11/16/2015 2:36:00 PM
Ahh!!! The birth of a precious little one..Enjoyed reading your work...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 11/14/2015 8:03:00 PM
wow, this is the OBVIOUS answer to how to do THAT TOPIC!!! Love it.
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Date: 11/13/2015 12:39:00 AM
Lovely. Viv x
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Date: 11/12/2015 3:53:00 PM
What a perfect visual, Barbara, in so few words. A lifetime...Love it, and all the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/12/2015 2:26:00 PM
Oh how true Barbara a delightful poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2015 1:45:00 PM
Excellent write. Enjoyed reading. Cleverly written.
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