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'the Joker's Paint Brush'

The lines of the once perfect dream now faded In its place distorted and crooked images Now play mind games with their hearts Drifting away from everything that is real Their once tranquil lives now in turmoil Do they just paint over the distorted lines? Rein in the emotions that make them blind Try and go back to the simple life Forget the adrenalin The pulsating need To delve into things Most likely not to succeed The dice has been rolled The cards are on the table The joker’s the one With the paint brush in hand ©180320121045

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/4/2014 11:43:00 PM
Marvellous. This piece is a glory on its own.
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Date: 3/25/2012 7:08:00 AM
ahh well done Wilma ! Oft it feels that way in the last two lines. Marvelous write. You brought it all together so well.
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Date: 3/24/2012 9:59:00 AM
A very true to life write here Wilma..) appreciated reading its lines...
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Date: 3/23/2012 3:41:00 PM
I enjoy your philosophies of life. I find great talent in poets that write with out rhythmic rhyme such as yourself. Thanks for sharing a part of you. Your going on my favorites list.
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Date: 3/18/2012 10:01:00 PM
this is beautiful and deep... sometimes..i love the picture a joker can paint,,, in another site..i had a joker after me..lol.. he or she got me good.. I had the biggest laugh ever... i think the joker was a she.. or how else would she had stuffed my socks.. lol..well anwyas.. this made me think of the joker from the pub... and batman has much fun playing with the joker as well..love your poemm.... have yourself a good night~ always*PD
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Date: 3/18/2012 11:36:00 AM
Hi missy! Sadly enough, this can happen to a lot of people, those "distorted lines" just being covered up and then we find out who is doing all that painting-- a lot of thoughts here that made me ponder-- and can relate to some level. Hopefully though, the joker won't be the one having the last laugh?? Happy Sunday to you, and mwahugs :D
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Date: 3/18/2012 8:28:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read your poem Wilma!Have a lovely day in sunshine ! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/18/2012 7:07:00 AM
You do write with a flare that stands up beautifuly... Lovely write muse.... YOur package is sent.... love Michael
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Date: 3/18/2012 5:24:00 AM
A deep write.Words that make one think.Enjoyed the read Wilma.Best wishes.
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Date: 3/18/2012 4:13:00 AM
Another classic from you Wilma, so many questions here in this wonderful poem, this sprinkled with sadness, and profoundness. harry
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