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The Instincts of Innocence

Take my hand Love, to where the stars hide above the upper blue of hot day, burning on the fingertips of Eternity's forbidden skin waiting within the thin melody of ivory savagery for us to escape the boundaries of silent imagination, we must go to where they struggle for our blessing we must see the symbol that we survive for high in their souls listen to the age of their light, taste the wisdom of their words, I need you to come with me to the birthplace of my love for you I need you to feel the movement of our young future in your honest ear, let them witness the love catalyst, launch between our heart bound eyes and in the finesse of our body fire they will know the faith and furor of stellar success as comet accents furnish the secrets of ancient suns with crystal hymns reflecting the atomic romance burgeoning blissfully in the volcanic skies of our combined minds - J.A.B.

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Ettie Christian-Bowling

Date: 9/16/2015 7:58:00 PM

Such powerful words I read in this poem... WOW Really did touch my heart, your words are soothing beyond words GREAT POEM-Love Ettie

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/17/2015 12:20:00 PM

The words are powerful because the love is intensely pure. Your heart is sympathetic to our soul journey because it can tastse the eternal kiss Ettie. This be a great poem because the love that spurred it is great...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/14/2015 6:17:00 AM

I'm glad you are writing here again. Your poetry is always deep and soulful..The love you present is something that can be felt through each line..Outstanding.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/14/2015 1:04:00 PM

The love is so hot Charma, so very hot on my heart...thank you for sharing with me the beauty of your insight. J.A.B.

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/14/2015 12:51:00 AM

Enjoyed the graphic depictions of material reality Justin, also the striving to describe the astral world and its interaction with spirituality and desire..'

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/14/2015 1:01:00 PM

I want my love her to be known in every plane of existence. Your comment is super xool and intelligent Joe. J.A.B.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/8/2015 12:16:00 PM

A well and a beautiful descriptive, excellent write Justin.........A.M.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/8/2015 10:02:00 PM

Love descibes she and I Afolabi, thanks...J.A.B.

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/7/2015 2:11:00 PM

Hi Justin. Lovely to see you have a new post. Beautiful and eloquent as always. hugs!

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/8/2015 12:42:00 AM

True love is so, this love be so Kim...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/6/2015 2:15:00 AM

"we must go to where they struggle for our blessing we must see the symbol that we survive for high in their souls...." Very interesting lines...we've got to have our witnesses when something so beautiful such as this occurs...there is nothing more special than the fusion of two genius minds...the understanding and wisdom is collateral...grand...eternally spacious. The universe is our audience, and we all look forward to your atomic eruptions...Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/6/2015 1:08:00 PM

Your comments have made a scorching comet of my soul today, leaving a trail of joyous love knowledge for the audience of our universe to be inspired by, thank you Laura...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/6/2015 2:12:00 AM

This journey to the source of love provokes one to disregard the boundaries of the imagination, to feel the tender touches of your affection, and to bask in all of its possibilities. I am enamored by this " furor of stellar success" you have composed, Justin... the light you shine is ageless, full of delectable sights, sounds, feels and tastes. I love the ancient suns and the volcanic skies that make up your fascinating mind..

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/6/2015 12:44:00 PM

Your perception of this poem's spirit is absolutely perfect! An urgent passion to reach and exceed the potential of star summoned love Laura...I hope that you also love the young star light and drums of desire that enliven my heart beautiful Poetess...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/5/2015 9:34:00 AM

I missed your contest, Justin. :( I just posted my entry today. I wish I had gotten my act together sooner. I still would like to know what you think of it. This piece? Well, it's beautiful...but what's new? Your poetry is always beautiful...My favorite lines? I need you to come with me to the birthplace of my love for you I need you to feel the movement of our young future in your honest ear....Lovely.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/5/2015 3:56:00 PM

The talent and beauty that you possess can never be too late. The birthplace of love is a magical place Eileen...J.A.B.