The Host

The Host Safe, keep me safe, they are coming fast...they are here... Circling, swarming, I am the contents of their envelope, sealed inside soon to be discarded... Help, Help me please, they won't release me...they keep me here... staring, observing, I am the subject of their experiment, soon I will be tested on... Leave, leave me now, they are with me...they are a part of me... sharing, consuming, I am the cocoon to new life, If only it were mine...

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/10/2017 3:46:00 AM

it's a bit of a puzzler, but i think i know what it's about! lol...off-the-wall, original...congrats on your win in the contest!

John Lawless

Date: 4/9/2017 6:48:00 PM

Brian, I'm still not sure what the hell is going on here....but it certainly grabbed my interest....thanks for entering the contest

Brian Davey
Date: 4/9/2017 7:15:00 PM

Thank you very much I enjoyed the contest very much

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2016 11:24:00 PM

BRIAN, Congratulations on your "Second Chance #2 WIN." Love LINDA

Brian Davey
Date: 4/28/2016 3:41:00 AM

Thanks again my friend

Lu Loo

Date: 4/19/2016 10:34:00 AM

Brian, the second stanza is the best! Very well written...Congrats on your placement in the Second Chance contest Brian..:)-luloo

Brian Davey
Date: 4/22/2016 6:39:00 AM

Thank you Laura I thought the same as well

Funom Makama

Date: 1/28/2016 8:01:00 AM

Words so gracious. Beauty so outspoken and creativity so explicit. I love this. Thanks for the beyond 7 share.

Brian Davey
Date: 1/28/2016 1:19:00 PM

Wow thank you so much and I lookin forward to your feedback in the future along with reading more of your work.