The Hibiscus Dance - the Butterfly Style

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~The Hibiscus Dance~ ( Butterfly) The hibiscus dance Under the light Pink yellow They smile Under The hot Sun nodding Happy their heads Praise pray worship God They're beautiful Just amazing Awesome Bloom in Many Colors So pretty Hibiscus are Just so wonderful In still devotion With their heads up Laugh enjoy Blue sky Sunshine The breeze Beautiful Butterfly comes All together dance. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 September.22.2015 ~Author's Notes: The "Butterfly" is a poetry style or form created by Michael Degenhardt.

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Laura Leiser

Date: 9/22/2015 9:03:00 PM

This is so pretty and picturesque, Dorian! I enjoyed the creative layout of your poem, too!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/23/2015 11:30:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Laura, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I deeply appreciate it all.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light God bless you!:)D.