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The Hardest Part

I'm very glad to hold your waist against mine; smelling your perfume, and feeling your warmth. Our heartbeats though, are becoming slower and colder; you are moving out to another place, because of a better job; I swear it, I'm really happy for you. I just wish that God would somehow pause time a little bit, to give us time to kiss, celebrate life, laugh, and play around in the open fields. I will miss your pancakes, smile, voice, sweet heart.......everything about you. The hardest part for me right now, is to tell you "goodbye"......

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Date: 4/2/2015 7:53:00 PM
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Date: 9/23/2014 9:34:00 PM
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/24/2014 6:06:00 AM
Welcome! ^_^ <3 <3 <3
Date: 9/23/2014 4:05:00 PM
oh so sad - i love the fact you miss the pancakes before anything else - that made me smile - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/24/2014 5:47:00 AM
Lol. Thanks Jan! ^_^ <3
Date: 9/23/2014 2:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win for this sad poem Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/24/2014 5:45:00 AM
Thanks for your applause Brenda! ^_^
Date: 9/23/2014 6:39:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/24/2014 5:42:00 AM
Thank you very much for your applause and continuous support Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Date: 9/22/2014 9:30:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/22/2014 11:59:00 PM
Thank you Linda! ^_^ <3 <3 Love, Teddy.
Date: 8/30/2014 9:52:00 AM
A very touching piece. I hope that your move brings many wonderful opportunities and joy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/2/2014 3:52:00 AM
Thank you for your encouragement and well-wishes Kiser! :)
Date: 8/30/2014 9:14:00 AM
What a sweet parting you have described here. Nicely put.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/2/2014 3:50:00 AM
Thank you for your comment Scott! :-)
Date: 8/30/2014 8:30:00 AM
Nice but smelling sad somewhere in the poem. Loved always,bl
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/2/2014 3:49:00 AM
Lol. True; the poem smells of sadness..... Thanks for reading and commenting my work BL! :-)

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