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the greatest gift

the greatest gift i ever recieved
was for no one else just for me
a music box from an old thrift store
and a poem that made my heart soar
two of the things that i loved most
that let me know the she was surely taking notes
it was christmas two years ago
and those were the presents that let love show
she had found a way to let me know
that her love was something special
and i should help it grow
i smiled and looked at her and gave her a hug
but not the kind you give a girl 
when you know that your in love
that would come later

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  1. Date: 12/24/2011 9:40:00 PM
    John... a nice thing to dweel Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

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    Date: 12/26/2011 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it's called love eternal. john
  1. Date: 12/23/2011 7:40:00 AM
    This is lovely, did you realize it? I love the store of this poem. Happy holidays, John.

  1. Date: 12/23/2011 7:21:00 AM
    Isn't it wonderful to receive John what our heart really desires and I hope that later the lady did receive the hug that told her you were in love! X Lizzie

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 10:18:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this one..Excellent personification..I enjoy those music box tunes also..I haven't read Waldon's Pond but will look at it..Maybe I can read some online to see if I would enjoy the book.Your presence at my work was uplifting...Sara

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 3:44:00 PM
    This is so cute, if you were here I'd pinch your cheeks, lol, vie

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 1:20:00 PM
    Smile ˜ O tis sooo very sweeet ˜ You have a such a tenderness about your lovely heart, John ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 12:56:00 PM
    Just beautiful John iii. Those special gifts we always remember even as time swiftly flies by us. John I wish you a very Merry Christmas and A Happy Happy New Year my dear friend. Love, Carol