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The Great Unquiet

The Great Unquiet Wherefore you this incandescent lit Should you turn all your light To sorrow Wherefore you jewel amidst pebbles Should you make from diamonds This sadness So Come my love think not Break nothing against frustrated walls Do not my love Strip illusion to threadbare patterns Tune not this needles twine To pluck inharmonious chords Wherefore the heat of your tears Should you trace your love by their fate To this weariness Wherefore you this petal of tenderness Should you so paint your colours to answer drear In emptiness Quiet now my love think not on Take this salted pinch to toss it wayward And do not my love Burden your dreams with such as arid sands Or make their dunes To mountains unattainable Hush now my love Do trouble not Come rest your tired soul Hush now my love Be at peace Come rest in my quiet soul Wherefore now my spirits light Should it not dance with you To forever Wherefore I if not by your side To mark such sorrow, such sadness Into I passes all weariness and emptiness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/2/2009 11:18:00 PM
Sincerest wishes to you. Your sincere friend Michael
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Date: 3/2/2009 11:16:00 PM
knowing how humble you are, you are just happy writing. I am so delighted Colin (big smile!!!!!!!!!) Proud of you!!!!!!!!!! I showed my father and he smiled to. You always have our votes ofcourse were a little biased because we care more about you then your poetry. God blessl you my friend and your son and daughter on this special occasion and I know they are proud of there dad. Congratulations again. From my dad Rene and Me stay healthy and may the good Lord bless you , your boy and daughter.
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Date: 3/2/2009 11:12:00 PM
Colin Im not suppose to be on here. I broke all the rules my friend for you. I just couldnt pass up this apportunity to congratulate my wonderful friend. Your talent has been overlooked for so long. It is about time the people on this sight recognize the gift that was passed on to you from your Dear mother Yvonne. I celebrate with you my brother in your glory and recognition. Long overdue and I know that you dont enter to many of these contest. You are to smart to know of your talents and cont
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Date: 2/16/2009 2:01:00 PM
Beautiful write and definitely a winner!! Congratulations with this one Colin.
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Date: 2/14/2009 9:22:00 PM
I can see why this wonderful write would win.Congratulations aloha,Koko
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Date: 2/14/2009 6:17:00 AM
beautifully done... this one!! congarts on winning!! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/14/2009 2:27:00 AM
Well deserving of FIRST place! Beautifully conveyed. Congratulation's on your win in Ms. Reynold's contest. Peace always, John
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Date: 2/13/2009 10:06:00 AM
Congrats Colin on a well deserved win in Kristen's contest. An outstanding write. Vince
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Date: 2/13/2009 9:40:00 AM
This is truly a great poem. As I read this I was reminded of Yeats. Well done and congrats on first place. -Jason
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Date: 2/13/2009 9:21:00 AM
Yes, I really did get chills reaching the end of this write. Congratulations Colin on your well deserved First Place win in Kristin's contest! Bravo! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/13/2009 1:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win , Colin . It really is a superb piece ...
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Date: 2/12/2009 7:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win, Colin! Such a lovely piece, full of passionate longing and sweet tenderness. Kudos! Donna G.
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Date: 2/12/2009 6:36:00 PM
Oh yeah I remember melting now! Congratulations #1,,yeahhhh, rahhhh, the crowd goes WILD! Oh Im sorry this is poetry, very nice write. Respectfully yours, Laurie
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Date: 2/12/2009 6:23:00 PM
Wow...this is first class poetry, Colin!! No wonder Kristin placed this amazing poem the number 1 Love poem!! It is as smooth as silk...and very beautiful. Congratulations, a well deserved winning poem!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/12/2009 6:02:00 PM
Colin congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/12/2009 5:29:00 PM
sigh swoon Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 1/11/2009 4:01:00 PM
This is what Mike meyers on SNL would say is, 'like butta'. :) This is easy like sunday mornin. amazingly soft, delicate, tender and brillaint. I just love the peace that I felt reading this. awesome my friend, love, Kristin
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Date: 1/11/2009 12:43:00 PM
"Come rest in my quiet soul" such a beautiful phrase Colin, very calming and sweet. I loved this. Laurie
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