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The Grape Pain

Today I am a grape Hanging on a vine Perhaps to be plucked one day Ending up in someones wine Maybe I'll be bitter One of the worst ones you could eat Or possibly be the most tastey ones The sweetist of the sweet I hang with a bunch of others That I see all through the day Longing to be anywhere But there seems to be no way Seeing alot of other beauties Farther down the line Hoping they will notice me When I'm plump and in my prime though now the nights are getting colder Others have begun to all fall down Bunches of dying grapes Laying everywhere on the ground Unable to handle this madness I'm letting go of this vine tonite So I won't have to wake to this sadness That I must see through each days light
Dan Kearley:9-21-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/19/2012 2:43:00 PM
a xool poem..Dan, loving grapes... why the sad and deep ending... the poem started off fun... anyways..PD
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Date: 11/8/2012 7:47:00 PM
Awesome one! Gotta favorite it. This is very creative! You're a sweet grape for sure. ;) Always, Laura
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Date: 9/22/2011 8:21:00 PM
Too bad, so sad, your poem. No comment on style..the sentiment is great... your friend in the pen/i think i wil recommend. your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS
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Dan Kearley
Date: 9/23/2011 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Gary... :-D
Date: 9/21/2011 7:32:00 PM
Before you fall of the vine let me pick you and taste.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 9/21/2011 8:03:00 PM
Blushingly...agreed :-)~o0o0O (grapes)
Date: 9/21/2011 4:04:00 PM
Juicy. Tony
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Dan Kearley
Date: 9/21/2011 8:29:00 PM
Thank you Tony.

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